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Post by arieona on Jul 16, 2006 16:30:44 GMT -5
This was a very good story! The only negative thing that I can honestly say is that there are some places were you slit up sentences that should have just been one and vise versa. Be sure to watch for that in other stories. I really liked the ending. It was very original. I honestly thought you were going to go with the cliché of the main character overcoming their obstacle no matter what the odds. Thumbs up for getting way from the predicable! ;D
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Post by Made2LuvU on Jul 16, 2006 21:49:57 GMT -5
Thanx!
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Post by wooffice on Nov 28, 2010 20:29:11 GMT -5
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